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    Please check my sentence

    Hi, kindly assist to comment my sentence :

    "Refer to our records, you still have 17 days annual leave need to be utilized by end of your contract."

    Thanks & regards.

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    Re: Please check my sentence

    not a teacher

    If I understand the meaning correctly, I would write it like this.

    According to our records, you still have 17 days annual leave that needs to be taken by the end of your contract.

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    Re: Please check my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by JMurray View Post
    not a teacher

    If I understand the meaning correctly, I would write it like this.

    According to our records, you still have 17 days annual leave that needs to be taken by the end of your contract.
    I would say "that need".

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