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    #1

    Please I would be really appreciated if you correct my following little phrase

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I have written the following phrase to include it in a Holiday card. Could you give me if it is ok please? I will be really appreciated!


    A new year is coming
    ...New hopes to get dreams and goals to come true.

    Our best wishes for a coming year filled with joy, happiness, health and success.

    Thank you so much in advance.

    Best regards,

    Roma Blanco ArŠoz

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    #2

    Re: Please I would be really appreciated if you correct my following little phrase

    ...New hopes to get dreams and goals to come true.
    This doesn't work for me. How about A new year is coming with fresh opportunities for hope and dreams to come true.

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    Re: Please I would be really appreciated if you correct my following little phrase

    Thanks!!! I will use it : )

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