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    pulled up Clash of Clans' built-in

    The following in red is confusing. Please rewrite it more easily. And I know Clash of Clans is a game.

    Uh oh. A rival player had gone aggressive, and one of Lee's fellow 'clan' members was under attack. Lee tapped a few icons, donating dozens of his troops to defend the friend from a brutal assault of archers and barbarians. Then, he pulled up Clash of Clans' built-in, real-money shop.While the game is free to download, its maker Supercell profits by selling virtual items to the most engaged players.

    Thank you.

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    Re: pulled up Clash of Clans' built-in

    Quote Originally Posted by unpakwon View Post
    The following in red is confusing. Please rewrite it more easily. And I know Clash of Clans is a game.

    Uh oh. A rival player had gone aggressive, and one of Lee's fellow 'clan' members was under attack. Lee tapped a few icons, donating dozens of his troops to defend the friend from a brutal assault of archers and barbarians. Then, he pulled up Clash of Clans' built-in, real-money shop.While the game is free to download, its maker Supercell profits by selling virtual items to the most engaged players.

    Thank you.
    He activated/clicked on (pulled up) the icon or link to the online shop in the game "Clash of Clans". The shop is built-in to the game and you have to pay real money to buy virtual items to use in the computer game.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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