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    We were in a big mess...

    Please check.

    we were having a great time whole evening. Taking photos and we were in a big mess, until Dave had come. He had kept so frown and worried that all of us were looking at him with shocked faces.

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    Re: We were in a big mess...

    Quote Originally Posted by englishlearner77 View Post
    Please check.

    we were having a great time whole evening. Taking photos and we were in a big mess, until Dave had come. He had kept so frown and worried that all of us were looking at him with shocked faces.
    It doesn't start with a capital letter and it doesn't make sense.

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    Re: We were in a big mess...

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    we were having a great time whole evening. Taking photos and we were in a big mess, until Dave had come. He had kept so frown and worried that all of us were looking at him with shocked faces.

    It's not quite clear what you mean by "we were in a big mess", but my guess is that you mean "we were messing around/about". This often means passing time in a pleasantly playful way, which seems to fit your context.
    To me, "with shocked faces" is too strong a response towards someone who merely looks worried.

    Here's one way to write it.
    "We were having a great time the whole evening, taking photos and messing about, until Dave came. He was frowning, and seemed so worried that we all looked at him anxiously."

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