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    sentence correction

    Hi, Is this sentence correct ? - "We are not shared that information for your financial security reasons." I guess it is incorrect but wanted to check with someone.

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    Re: sentence correction

    Quote Originally Posted by starryeyes8 View Post
    Hi, is this sentence correct? "We are not shared that information for your financial security reasons." I guess it is incorrect but wanted to check with someone.
    Welcome to the forum.

    I am curious to know why you "guess it is incorrect".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: sentence correction

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Welcome to the forum.

    I am curious to know why you "guess it is incorrect".
    Hi. Because I think correct sentence should be "Your information is not shared with us because of financial security reasons".

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    Re: sentence correction

    I"m not sure what this is supposed to mean.
    "Financial security" means being comfortable that you will have an income that will cover your expenses.

    "Your financial information has not been shared with us to protect your privacy and security." Do you mean something like that?
    "For your privacy and security, we do not share your financial information with others." Do you mean something like that?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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