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    I Need Some Answers To The Following Sentences

    I have difficulties getting the following sentences corrected.

    - My heart like someone who walks soft and light, like a tall cypress that moves with the wind blowing softly
    - (My heart) finally likes just one person among thousands (my heart is very fastidious) cannot
    - My heart does not bear to be alone. Hence, it likes me to reach the friend
    - "K": Between two ways of union with the friend and separating from the friend, I
    Last edited by meuus; 03-Jan-2014 at 13:01. Reason: making some correction

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    Re: I Need Some Answers To The Following Sentences

    Welcome to the forum.

    What was your purpose in writing these lines? In each sentence, which part do you think needs to be corrected? Why have you written "(vasl)" after the word "friend" twice?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: I Need Some Answers To The Following Sentences

    Thanks for welcoming me to the forum
    The word (vasl) was mistake and I have edit the post and
    only leave the sentences that I need correction.

    Thanks

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    Re: I Need Some Answers To The Following Sentences

    None of your sentences makes sense or ends with a final punctuation mark.

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    Re: I Need Some Answers To The Following Sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by meuus View Post
    I have difficulties getting the following sentences corrected.

    - My heart like someone who walks soft and light, like a tall cypress that moves with the wind blowing softly
    - (My heart) finally likes just one person among thousands (my heart is very fastidious) cannot
    - My heart does not bear to be alone. Hence, it likes me to reach the friend
    - "K": Between two ways of union with the friend and separating from the friend, I
    Are you trying to write poetry?

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