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    3.Is the paragraph cohesive and proper?

    Hi everyone,

    Now I am translating the chinese standard for testing the tempered glass lids into English,but I am not sure whether some of them are correct or conform to ways of thinking of westners.I would apprecicate it if you could help me.

    “Testing methods: Seal two sides of the tempered glass lids completely with a transparent adhesive tape. With the concave side upward ,place the tempered glass lid onto a 20 mm wooden board.Hold the tempered glass lid with one hand and make sure a dot near the other edge of the tempered glass lid touch the wooden board, punch the dot with a wimble until the lid fracture into pieces.The punched dot shall be 1\4 lid radius and no less than 25mm away from the edge . one fifth area of the glass lid centered around the punched dot shall be excluded from testing.”



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    Re: 3.Is the paragraph cohesive and proper?

    with a transparent - with transparent
    touch- touches
    fracture- fractures
    1\4 lid radius- 1/4 of the radius of the lid
    one fifth area- one fifth

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