I feel/felt that the pilgrimage I had recently attended was the time for me...

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I feel/felt that the pilgrimage I had recently attended was the time for me to strengthen my faith and exert myself in the propagation of the religion.

Is the sentence natural? And which bold word should I use?

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I feel/felt that the pilgrimage I had recently attended was the time for me to strengthen my faith and exert myself in the propagation of the religion.

Is the sentence natural? And which bold word should I use?

Thanks.

"Felt" because it precedes "I had recently attended".

I feel that the pilgrimage I recently attended ...
I feel that the pilgrimage I have recently attended ...
I felt that the pilgrimage I had recently attended ...
 

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exert myself in the propagation of the religion

This doesn't sound very natural to me. How about something like make greater efforts to spread my religion?
 

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I'd be more likely to make or go on a pilgrimage rather than attend one.
 
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