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    One day

    Please, would you correct these two sentences. I am not sure if I need a comma in this kind of sentences.

    1.One day Peter talked to a literature professor from Kenya, who had never got an opportunity to work in his profession since he came to the country.
    2. He met some women from Eastern Europe, who worked hard and lived frugally, because they had to support their respective families in their homelands.

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    Re: One day

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Please, would you correct these two sentences. I am not sure if I need a comma in this kind of sentences.

    1.One day Peter talked to a literature professor from Kenya, who had never got an opportunity to work in his profession since he came to the country.
    2. He met some women from Eastern Europe, who worked hard and lived frugally, because they had to support their respective families in their homelands.
    For me, all three commas are incorrect.

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