I Need an email to send it for HR seeking for more salary than the offered.
I had attended interview say in A company and they offered me some good figure after some initial negotiation after this I have attended interview in say B company where they have offered more than A company but I more interested to work in A company how do I convey in A that I want more salary than the B company is offering me.
It would be great if you provide me some email samples and tips about how to communicate this to HR over the phone.
Mary, as you know, I really want to work at A. I really liked all that I heard about the job. But since we started talking, I have received an offer from B for $X. Can you match that?
You may be asking too much if you were already happy with A and now you are asking them to give you even more than B. Asking them to match what B is offering will still get you an increase. You run the risk of their saying "Well, if the money is all you care about, good luck at B."
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