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    Sentence Check

    Does this sound right?

    "I was ecstatic after our internet started working after 5 days."

    - It seems slightly ambiguous to me. Was he/she ecstatic after 5 days of working internet? Or was it when the internet just started working?

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    Re: Sentence Check

    Welcome to the forum.

    Is this your own sentence or somebody else's?

    It would be more natural to say

    'I was ecstatic when our internet started working after we'd been offline for five days'.

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    Re: Sentence Check

    Quote Originally Posted by golden4ce View Post
    Does this sound right?

    "I was ecstatic after our internet started working after 5 days."

    - It seems slightly ambiguous to me. Was he/she ecstatic after 5 days of working internet? Or was it when the internet just started working?
    I don't find it at all ambiguous. Not a very good sentence, but not ambiguous.

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