Help - Writing letter/email to Secretary of a ceo

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Dear [Name]

As per our conversation over the phone on Friday, kindly confirm that Mr ABC will be visiting our campus on this coming Thursday during second half.

Kindly acknownlodge the same.

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Dear [Name]

As per our conversation over the phone on Friday, kindly confirm that Mr ABC will be visiting our campus on this coming Thursday during second half.

Kindly acknownlodge the same.

Regards

It's mostly OK, but "during second half" doesn't make sense. The second half of what? It would be better to give exact times. Also note the correct spelling of acknowledge".
 
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Thanks.

Actually the exact time hasnt decided yet.
 

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I am very glad to find this forum. Hope I can improve my email writing skills.

Yes, when we write an email, we should know what we want to deliver.
To me, I often need to request someone help me, what should I pay attention to?

Look forward to hearing from you.
 
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