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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In recent years, research found that number of crimes have gradually increased in countries around the world. It seems, that victims behind these crimes found to be teenagers, who cause an ultimate damage to society as well as to him/herself. It is true that, children involved in these crimes through medias, such as television, computers and even mobile phone "one of the distructive weapon for root of crimes" has caused a change in behaviour and pattern of mental attitudes of young generations. In this essay, i will give my opinion to conclude how these violence could be practically reduced by applying simpler methods.
Firstly, most of our children are isolated at homes away from parents attention, becasue many parents are occupied during 8 hours of work schedule at office. During these times, freedom comes first for children to behave on their own way in the absence of their adults, watching action movies, harrassing episodes and ultimately ended-up in watching sexual materials like videos, porn website access through internet. It takes, these events a kind of capacity to generate violence in their young brains, while hormones reacts for an action of agony. These circumstances eventually pushes a brain storm activity for them to react vigourously to an action of violence to be experienced.
Secondly, parents should schedule their time circles for a spare time to spent with children, talking to them about theri studies, friends they are mostly in contact with, how often they use to watch TV, or surf internet. Also, as an adult it is a duty and responsibility of parents, to educate children with proper information. A university research shows that, most of violence take place where children are been isolated from their parents. therefore reaction of love and attention must be a key point to prevent children from been violent and will prevent increase of violence.
thirdly, government should authorize privated commercials to be more desciplined and
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