He has a clear overview/view/prospect of his objectives

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Ryan.

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Hello.

Which of the following words are more appropriate to be used in the sentence below?

"He has a clear view/prospect/overview of his objectives and is very hard working and determined in this/his way.

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I would delete "in this/his way". I don't think it adds anything important.
 
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