[Grammar] I need help with my application letter

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azmiulul

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Hi!
can somebody help me with my application letter. I will send it to reputable law firm and I don't know if it is correct or not.

in the letter I have to write my previous job
this is the letter

I
was working as a paralegal at Law Office Afdal Zikri & Partners and Posbakum while I was completing my thesis before. As a paralegal, I helped our office’s lawyer to draft litigation documents. My academic, personal and professional experience has solidified my commitment to legal service. And at present, I’m completing postgraduate program at faculty of law Universitas Gadjah Mada on Master of Litigation which has integrated curriculum with most of Special Education for Advocate Profession (PKPA)

Note: I'm no longer working for that Office

best regards
Azmi

 

emsr2d2

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Hi!
can somebody help me with my application letter. I will send it to reputable law firm and I don't know if it is correct or not.

in the letter I have to write my previous job
this is the letter

I
was working as a paralegal at Law Office Afdal Zikri & Partners and Posbakum while I was completing my thesis before. As a paralegal, I helped our office’s lawyer to draft litigation documents. My academic, personal and professional experience has solidified my commitment to legal service. And at present, I’m completing postgraduate program at faculty of law Universitas Gadjah Mada on Master of Litigation which has integrated curriculum with most of Special Education for Advocate Profession (PKPA)

Note: I'm no longer working for that Office

best regards
Azmi


You have used correct capitalisation in your draft letter. Please click the Edit Post button and correct the capitalisation in the rest of your post.
 
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