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    change of appointed time

    I want to send a text to my child’s teacher. My text is as follows:

    Current appointed time: 5pm on Mondays
    Can we change the lesson time to Mondays, Tuesdays or Thursdays? If you can, which day is convenient to you.

    Please correct my English if I am wrong.

    Many thanks for your help!
    Last edited by queeniech; 29-Jan-2014 at 08:36.

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    Re: change of appointed time

    Quote Originally Posted by queeniech View Post
    I want to send a text to my child’s teacher. My text is as follows:

    Current appointed time: 5pm on Mondays
    Can we change the lesson time to Mondays, Tuesdays or Thursdays? If you can, which day is convenient to you.

    Please correct my English if I am wrong.

    Many thanks for your help!
    Say "Current lesson time: 5pm Mondays"
    I don't understand why you're asking the teacher to change the lesson from Mondays to Mondays, and in your question you haven't specified a time.

    "Hi.

    You currently teach [name of your child] at 5pm on Mondays. Would it be possible to change the lesson day/time? Can you let me know if you can do Tuesdays or Thursdays and, if so, what time?

    Thanks.

    [Your name]"
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: change of appointed time

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Say "Current lesson time: 5pm Mondays"
    I don't understand why you're asking the teacher to change the lesson from Mondays to Mondays, and in your question you haven't specified a time.
    Thanks ems

    The lesson time should be changed on Tuesdays or Thursdays or Fridays at 5pm. Not ' from Mondays to Mondays'. Sorry for my typo.


    Are the following sentences natural?

    Hi

    Current lesson time: 5pm Mondays

    Would it be possible to change the lesson day at 5pm on Tuesdays or Thursdays or Fridays?

    Thanks.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 29-Jan-2014 at 09:31.

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    Re: change of appointed time

    Would it be possible to change the lesson to 5pm on Tuesdays, Thursdays or Fridays?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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