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    acheiving four consecutive excellent GPA each semester in the last two years of study

    Hello,

    Does the phrase below sound OK to your ears? I think it is clumsy. I would be glad if you could make it more idiomatic.

    "Ranked in the top 10% students and achieving four consecutive excellent GPA's each semester in the last two years of study"

    Thanks.
    Last edited by Ryan.; 04-Feb-2014 at 02:43.

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    Re: acheiving four consecutive excellent GPA each semester in the last two years of s

    Answered here under a different title.

    When you later received good answers from the other forum, Ryan, it would have been considerate of you to delete this thread to save our members the trouble of answering the same question.

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    Re: acheiving four consecutive excellent GPA each semester in the last two years of s

    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan. View Post
    Hello,

    Does the phrase below sound OK to your ears? I think it is clumsy. I would be glad if you could make it more idiomatic.

    "Ranked in the top 10% students and achieving four consecutive excellent GPA's each semester in the last two years of study"

    Thanks.
    I've noticed that you have asked similar questions in several threads. Why not post the entire resume and ask for comments? It is impossible to edit a resume one sentence/bullet point at a time.

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