holdenenglish
Member
- Joined
- Dec 21, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Dear tearchers
in the following paragraph, should I use "staff" or "staffs"? And, just wondering if the paragraph sounds natural to you? Any edits needed?
Pension shceme members: “HSBC’s staffs are helpful, polite, and efficient.”More than 95% of HSBC's pension scheme members are satisfied with our pension services, according to a recent survey conducted for HSBC. The Pension scheme member survey was carried out from in December 2013 to get members’ feedback on our pension services. The results have been very encouraging.
Regards
Holden
in the following paragraph, should I use "staff" or "staffs"? And, just wondering if the paragraph sounds natural to you? Any edits needed?
Pension shceme members: “HSBC’s staffs are helpful, polite, and efficient.”More than 95% of HSBC's pension scheme members are satisfied with our pension services, according to a recent survey conducted for HSBC. The Pension scheme member survey was carried out from in December 2013 to get members’ feedback on our pension services. The results have been very encouraging.
Regards
Holden