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    Making sentences without grammar mistakes... Comments and suggestions are welcome...

    Spending money for sports in schools (topic)
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    Spending money for sports in schools is good for students. Almost all students want to participate in extracurricular activities like sports, music, painting, cooking, games etc. I believe, not every student is a brilliant or a genius or a sports person. Every person on the earth has got some talent. Encouraging them, supporting them in schools is a very good thing.

    Spending money for all activities including study, sports, music...etc is worthwhile. Schools are the foundation for every student, It should spend money on every activity.
    Last edited by Abishai; 15-Feb-2014 at 19:06.

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    Re: Making sentences without grammar mistakes... Comments and suggestions are welcome

    When will you submit this essay to your teacher/tutor?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Making sentences without grammar mistakes... Comments and suggestions are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    When will you submit this essay to your teacher/tutor?
    Thanks for reply.

    Actually , I am not a student , I saw this article in the newspaper and I created my own sentences. I want to improve language by writing. I am not good at writing.

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    Re: Making sentences without grammar mistakes... Comments and suggestions are welcome

    OK, then the first thing you should do is click "Edit Post" and tidy it up. The lines break in strange places. Make it one or two complete paragraphs so that the words continue all the way across the text box like this post. Also, you don't need a double line break except between paragraphs. Note the correct spelling of "genius".

    In addition, we don't put a space before a comma. Look at the spacing around your punctuation in post #3.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Making sentences without grammar mistakes... Comments and suggestions are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    OK, then the first thing you should do is click "Edit Post" and tidy it up. The lines break in strange places. Make it one or two complete paragraphs so that the words continue all the way across the text box like this post. Also, you don't need a double line break except between paragraphs. Note the correct spelling of "genius".

    In addition, we don't put a space before a comma. Look at the spacing around your punctuation in post #3.

    I have edited my post, please check and let me know about errors.
    Thanks

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