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Last summer, I took a family trip to E-DA World, an amusement theme park, located at Kaohsiung in southern Taiwan. It is an amazing place for fun. Its recreational events cover a wide range of different themes, like arts, culture, shopping, and holidays. Visitors can enjoy various leisure fun in the E-DA World. I spent a whole afternoon on taking various rides. I thought the water ride is one of the most exciting ones. While I was getting on the ride, I screamed through the whole ride. That really got my adrenaline pumping! That was awesome! Although I seldom go vacationing in southern Taiwan, the journey leaves me a favorable impression. Therefore, I would like to visit there again in the future. E-DA World is a really amazing place for holidays!