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    What's wrong with this sentence?

    After Kay parked her car next to the bus, she noticed that it had a flat tire.

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    #2

    Re: What's wrong with this sentence?

    Welcome to the forums, lori.

    Why do you think there's something wrong with it?

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    Re: What's wrong with this sentence?

    Hint: what has a flat tire? How would the reader know that?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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