[Application] Application for Admision re test for my daughter in class I

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foz.nadeem

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Hi all,
kindly help me to write an effetive application to the principal of school for admission re-test , as my daughter has given the admission test but she didnt succeed, as i know she is brilliant and confident so i want that she get the chance of re-test as the school im applying for is very good place for her
waiting for quick response from u all.. thanks,

A worried mother.
 

emsr2d2

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Hi all,

Kindly help me to write an effective application to the principal of a school for an admission re-test ​(no comma here) as my daughter has [STRIKE]given[/STRIKE] taken and failed the admission test. [STRIKE]but she didnt succeed,[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]as[/STRIKE] I know she is brilliant and confident so I want [STRIKE]that she[/STRIKE] her to get the chance of re-test as the school I'm applying for is a very good place for her.
[STRIKE]waiting for quick response from you all. [/STRIKE] Inappropriate. We work to our timescales, not yours.

Thanks.

A worried mother.

Please try to write the letter yourself first. Post it here and we will comment. Note my corrections to your post above.
 
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