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pnong

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Good Day,

Kindly assist in this sentence. I don't whether I indicated it properly.

"Weight gain is the corollary of the arrival of the bakery just across my house".


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Good Day,

Kindly assist in this sentence. I don't whether I indicated it properly.

"Weight gain is the corollary of the arrival of the bakery just across my house".


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Your sentence is very awkward.

The bakery that just opened across from my house will surely result in my gaining weight.
 

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This isn't a correct use of "corollary." The bakery opening up nearby is not some "rule" or "proposition" that has been proved.

You could say your weight gain is a consequence of the bakery opening.
 
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