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  1. Banned
    Interested in Language
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Polish
      • Home Country:
      • Cayman Islands
      • Current Location:
      • UK

    • Join Date: Feb 2014
    • Posts: 1
    #1

    Simple information text.

    Hello!

    I'm about to start a new business in the UK. I already took a few English lessons to be able to communicate with my clients but as English is not my native language I just don't... feel it. I need to inform my clients about something, here's the text:

    Hello!

    We would like to offer a free 50 Discount Code for our products . You can use it in our online store during the checkout process.
    Discount will apply to every item in your shopping cart!

    Your Discount Code: 00000000

    Your Discount Code is valid until 05/03/2014. If you have any questions, please call us on 8888888888.

    Regards,

    ..
    Can someone tell if there are any (spelling) mistakes or if the language is official / formal enough?
    Thank you.

  2. charliedeut's Avatar
    VIP Member
    Interested in Language
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Spanish
      • Home Country:
      • Spain
      • Current Location:
      • Spain

    • Join Date: Oct 2009
    • Posts: 5,550
    #2

    Re: Simple information text.

    I wonder how many speakers of Polish there are in the Cayman Islands.
    Please be aware that I'm neither a native English speaker nor a teacher.

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