texx
Banned
- Joined
- Feb 28, 2014
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Cayman Islands
- Current Location
- UK
Hello!
I'm about to start a new business in the UK. I already took a few English lessons to be able to communicate with my clients but as English is not my native language I just don't... feel it. I need to inform my clients about something, here's the text:
Can someone tell if there are any (spelling) mistakes or if the language is official / formal enough?
Thank you.
I'm about to start a new business in the UK. I already took a few English lessons to be able to communicate with my clients but as English is not my native language I just don't... feel it. I need to inform my clients about something, here's the text:
Hello!
We would like to offer a free £50 Discount Code for our products . You can use it in our online store during the checkout process.
Discount will apply to every item in your shopping cart!
Your Discount Code: 00000000
Your Discount Code is valid until 05/03/2014. If you have any questions, please call us on 8888888888.
Regards,
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Can someone tell if there are any (spelling) mistakes or if the language is official / formal enough?
Thank you.