Student or Learner
The following is a notice on the beam at the entrance of a school. I find the wording too long-winded. Could a native speaker rephrase the notice so that unnecessary words are removed? Thanks.
All parents/visitors are requested to report to the General Office first before proceeding to other areas of the school premises.
I would do so as follows. Is it OK?
Parents/visitors have to report to the General Office before proceeding to other premises of the school.
No. There is only one premises.
"All visitors must report to the General Office"