I would appreciate if you guys can help me to write my email looks smart. :)
it is not my first language and I've always been bad with my grammar I mean English
I'm writing an email to university that I want to attend to request more information regarding admission and how does credit transfer work, I did some research but couldn't find enough informations,

To Whom It May Concern:


My name is .....

I am writing to request admin information regarding ___ engineering program at ___ university.

I have enrolled in the ___ engineer program with ___ college and I am currently working in the industry in downtown.
and I am highly interested in attending your university. so I would like to inquire about qualification and in particular is the college degree one of your accepted qualification?

Thank you very much for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.