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    #1

    Question Letter English

    Hey! How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. My family and I are very good as well.
    I received a letter last week, that you asked me to write about how I spent my vacation, so for you I write below.
    I just spent my school holidays with my family in Yogyakarta. On the first day of my trip in Yogyakarta, we went to Borobudur temple. There, we take pictures around the Borobudur temple that was beautiful and magnificent. Besides that, we toured down villages, rice fields and river with riding elephant available, called the Borobudur elephant safari, and we saw activity around Borobudur residents and enjoy the fresh air.
    On the second day, we went to the hot springs in salatiga. There, I swam with my family. After that, we went to Malioboro which is the shop for souvenirs largest and most famous. There are many objects that are beautiful and inexpensive, such as batik, handicrafts, leather puppets, and others. While on the way home, we stopped to eat food that is typical Jogja.
    We were very tired, but very happy because it was the first day we visited Jogja.
    So, that's all about my school holiday. How about you? I'm really interested to know about it. We'll talk about it when we meet.
    Last edited by tiya arsyilia; 22-Mar-2014 at 09:29.

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    Re: Letter English

    D​o you have a question for us?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Letter English

    please correct my letter! is there something wrong?

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    Re: Letter English

    Quote Originally Posted by tiya arsyilia View Post
    Please correct my letter. Is there something anything wrong with it?
    Is your letter being written for homework/assignment?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: Letter English

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Is your letter being written for homework/assignment?
    My letter for homework. Is all correct?

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    Re: Letter English

    We cannot help with homework or assignments. You must submit your work to your teacher. Your teacher is not interested in seeing what I can write. Write the best letter you can. After you get your homework back from your teacher, you can come back to us if you don't understand any of your teacher's comments or corrections. Good luck.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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