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    affordable prices

    Is the following wording natural?

    There are always great new things to explore in Phuket Island, which offers water activities, land adventures and many more at such affordable prices. It is a wonderful holiday destination. I loved our time in Phuket and we have memories from there that will last us a lifetime.

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    Re: affordable prices

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Is the following wording natural?

    There are always great new things to explore in Phuket Island, which offers water activities, land adventures and many more at such affordable prices. It is a wonderful holiday destination. I loved our time in Phuket and we have memories from there that will last us a lifetime.
    "Affordable prices" is fine. But, "offers water activities, land adventures and many more" is wrong. Many more what? You could use "much more".

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