Bono09
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- Joined
- Mar 28, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
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- English
- Home Country
- Philippines
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- Philippines
Good day everyone!
Can someone please find the errors in my introduction? Or which of the sentences need improvement? Thank you so much
Life is like a highway, a long and vast road. It's a never-ending route, a place where meeting new people is inevitable. It's a place where we'll encounter obstacles and obstructions as we pass through it. Life is a breathtaking journey. It's a tough road that awaits you, full of mystery and surprises and you'll never see it coming. One has to be fearless, brave enough to strive and fight for his/her life.
The question is, would you fight alone?
In this life-long road trip, would you travel alone?
Through Cassidy's journey, she has always been driving alone, facing all the challenges by herself. Being deceived by love before, she's too afraid to let anyone handle her wheel. Thereupon, she closed the door and built her defenses up so no one could ever enter her heart again.
What if one day, she meets the right guy who will join her in her road trip in life?
Is she willing to take a chance?
Will she finally handover the keys and let him take the wheel?
Is she set forth to be the passenger?
Can someone please find the errors in my introduction? Or which of the sentences need improvement? Thank you so much
Life is like a highway, a long and vast road. It's a never-ending route, a place where meeting new people is inevitable. It's a place where we'll encounter obstacles and obstructions as we pass through it. Life is a breathtaking journey. It's a tough road that awaits you, full of mystery and surprises and you'll never see it coming. One has to be fearless, brave enough to strive and fight for his/her life.
The question is, would you fight alone?
In this life-long road trip, would you travel alone?
Through Cassidy's journey, she has always been driving alone, facing all the challenges by herself. Being deceived by love before, she's too afraid to let anyone handle her wheel. Thereupon, she closed the door and built her defenses up so no one could ever enter her heart again.
What if one day, she meets the right guy who will join her in her road trip in life?
Is she willing to take a chance?
Will she finally handover the keys and let him take the wheel?
Is she set forth to be the passenger?
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