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    #1

    Red face who could help with paraphraseing?


    Dear all:

    Ineed help to edit
    can any one help??
    Last edited by tweter; 10-Apr-2014 at 15:53.

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    #2

    Re: who could help with paraphraseing?

    What are 'Nancy standards'?

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    Re: who could help with paraphraseing?

    Thank you sir:
    Here nancy standards'


    Standard 1: The program promotes positive relationships among all children and adults. [...]


    Standard 2: The program implements a curriculum that is consistent with its goals for children and promotes learning and development in each of the following areas: social, emotional, physical, language, and cognitive. [[...]

    Standard 3: Teaching The program uses developmentally, culturally, and linguistically appropriate and effective teaching approaches that enhance each child’s learning and development in the context of the curriculum goals. [...]


    Standard 4: Assessment of Child Progress The program is informed by ongoing systematic, formal, and informal assessment approaches to provide information on children’s learning and development. [...]


    Standard 5: Health The program promotes the nutrition and health of children and protects children and staff from illness and injury. [...]

    Standard 6: Teachers The program employs and supports a teaching staff with the educational qualifications, knowledge, and professional commitment necessary to promote children’s learning and development and to support families’ diverse needs and interests. [...]

    Standard 7: Families The program establishes and maintains collaborative relationships with each child’s family to foster children’s development in all settings. These relationships are sensitive to family composition, language, and culture. [...]


    Standard 8: Community Relationships The program establishes relationships with and uses the resources of the children’s communities to support the achievement of program goals. [...]
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    Re: who could help with paraphraseing?

    Also those two and that's why need help, as it's not just words.

    Regards,
    Sara

    Standard 9: Physical Environment The program has a safe and healthful environment that provides appropriate and well-maintained indoor and outdoor physical environments. [...]

    Standard 10: Leadership and Management The program effectively implements policies, procedures, and systems that support stable staff and strong personnel, and fiscal, and program management so all children, families, and staff have high-quality experiences. [...]
    Last edited by 5jj; 30-Mar-2014 at 21:42. Reason: See post no. 9

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    Re: who could help with paraphraseing?

    These appear to be NAEYC standards.

    In what way do you want them to be paraphrased? They appear to be written in a fairly clear way.

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    #6

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    Yes, it is ... iwant to paraphrase each one with my own words. In other words,
    want to understand the meaning of each one then rewrite using other words. Have anice day

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    By the way, this is not homework. Iwork in early childhood centre and
    need to paraphrase to read in my speech. All bests

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    #8

    Re: who could help with paraphraseing?

    If they need to be in your own words, then you need to do that paraphrasing. Otherwise it will be OUR words, not yours. We can provide comments on what you do.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #9

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    To make the thread less unwieldy, I have shortened post 3 and 4. The full standards can be found here.

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    #10

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    Ok, i'll paraphrase with my own words then i'll post here

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