[Grammar] "They are nice both the business side as well as the people using it"

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MartinDV

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I'm Italian and I'm writing my linkedin profile. The full context is as follows: "I design good interactive products, which are nice both the business side as well as the people using it". Is that correct? Thanks for your help.
 

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It's fine up to the word "products". After that, I don't know what you mean. We don't really describe interactive products as "nice" and "both the business side as well as the people using it" doesn't make sense. Can you try to explain what you mean in a different way?
 

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Can you try to explain what you mean in a different way?

"I design good interactive products, effective for business (e.g selling a product, generating a lead, completing a task) as well for people using them (e.g easy to use and good looking)."
 
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effective business tools that are user friendly?
 

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I'm Italian and I'm writing my linkedin profile. The full context is as follows: "I design good interactive products, which are nice both the business side as well as the people using it". Is that correct? Thanks for your help.

How about:

"I design good interactive products, which are beneficial for both business and private use."
 

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"I design good interactive products, which are beneficial for both business and private use."

I don't think that is what the original poster meant.

He means that the products are good for business and that they are easy to use. That is, that they provide a benefit to the company and are also "nice" for the person who is using them.

The person using the product is doing so on behalf of the business/company.
 
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