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  1. B45
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    Short email to a friend -

    Short email to a friend -

    I'd love to join y'all on this hike, but I won't be in Reno until late afternoon of the 14th, therefore, I won't be able to deposit the money at this time. Could someone spot me first, and I will pay them back in cash or wire transfer as soon as I'm in town.

    Can this be said? What would a native say.

    My only question is if the comma after therefore is necessary?
    Last edited by B45; 09-Apr-2014 at 18:29.

  2. bhaisahab's Avatar
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    Re: Short email to a friend -

    Yes but "therefore" should start a new sentence.

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