Short email to a friend -

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Short email to a friend -

I'd love to join y'all on this hike, but I won't be in Reno until late afternoon of the 14th, therefore, I won't be able to deposit the money at this time. Could someone spot me first, and I will pay them back in cash or wire transfer as soon as I'm in town.

Can this be said? What would a native say.

My only question is if the comma after therefore is necessary?
 
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Yes but "therefore" should start a new sentence.
 
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