I deleted some of your text. It's not that it was incorrect. If you write something you probably believe it. It you state an opinion it probably is your viewpoint.Statement of Purpose
I am interested
to applyin applying for athe Masterís degree programme in Materials Science and Engineering at Kiel University, scheduled to begin in October, 2014. I am compassionate toward this program and I am confident that my strong academic background in Mechanical engineering (Why did you capitalize Mechanical and not engineering? I wouldn't capitalize either one though some people do), combined with relevant industrial work experience and hands-on trainingstraining will help me to fulfill the degree requirements. (You want to do more than fulfill the basic requirements, you want to succeed)
amgraduated from the Chittagong University of Engineering and Technology with mya four-year bachelorís degree in Mechanical Engineering in 2007. A partApart from formthe engineering degree, I am a certified welding inspector fromcertified by the American Welding Society as well as (This whole sentence is confusing. Are you certified as a Level 11 something?) Level--II in radiographic testing, ultrasonic testing, magnetic particle testing and penetrant (What is penetrant?) testing from the American Society of Nondestructive Testing. I have more than 5five years of work experience in Oil and Gas industries as a certified welding inspector. where
Our major clients were leading oil manufacturers (Oil isn't manufactured) including Saudi Aramco and Petroleum Development Oman. I am currently working at Al Haditha Petroleum Services where my job responsibilities includes reviews of construction drawings, verification of different types of materials test certificates along with visual inspection, reviews of the welding procedure for different types of materials and selection of
asuitable welding processes for quality assurance, interpretation of radiographic films to identify thewelding defects and consultation for thepossible solutions, planning for strategic improvements, collaboration with the construction department regarding international codes and standards to comply with, and preparation and coordination of hydro test packages.
I have found my academic background and work practice rewarding which
, I believe,(I believe puts you in a weak position, delete it) motivates me to pursue graduate study in the relevantthis discipline . The higher study will allow me to further extend my knowledge in this field and to meet the increasing demands of todayís energy and manufacturing industries. I acquired a basic knowledge of engineering metallurgy during my undergraduate studies and further explored this subject during my certification course with the American Welding Society. Over the years, these useful experiences have increased my enthusiasm to pursue a Masterís degree related to material development and engineering, sensor technology, optics, microelectronics, photovoltaic technique etc. I believeThis Masterís program will contribute positively to the development of my career by potentially upgrading my current position in the workplace and will subsequently allow me to enhance my knowledge of materials science.
Studying Materials Science and Engineering in Germany, which is the cradle of materials sciences and the origin of many mechanical engineering wonders, will avail me to solidify my knowledge both practically and theoretically. If given a chance, I will be learning at one of the best universities in Europe
thatwhich offers outstanding facilities for gaining theoretical knowledge and practical skills. Besides, I will have the opportunity to develop my communication, technical, learning and presentation abilities in an international academic environment thatwhich provides the privilege of meeting people with different backgrounds and experience.
I realize that program is
highly demandedin high demand and, hence, competitive, yet I have the aptitude, dedication and motivation to meet the requirements and to excel at your university. I am excited to gain new learning proficiencies, and , in my view,this program will be the best way to achieve that. I look forward to attending this Masterís degree Programme at Kiel University in order to further improve my capabilities and skills and I will be eagerly waiting to hear a positive replayreply from you.
Khaled Mahmud Azad
Student or Learner