Freedom of speech

[Dhea789]

Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?




In the last decade, The freedom of speeches have been practice in many countries and has been debate but some obsolete speech and some advocate freedom of speech.It rather depends in citizen , cultures and political manner.One of the example of democracy system are USA , Canada and Philippines . These country has freedom to express their self in writing and speak but some country has no freedom in speech like china and middle east . Their government system are Communist or monarchy Which control by their ruler or king.


The positive ways of having freedom of speech is that we can able to express our self in editorial like news paper, if we have something opinion in politics, showbiz and other things in the society. Another one is that they can select what kind of government system they prepared. Likewise parliamentary or democratic system. People become updated in the current events what happening in their surrounding and they can also express their self what fashion or clothes they can wear.


On the contrary, their is negative effects of this freedom of speech are war against nation because They want to acquire their own freedom and cannot select their clothes reference. In some country like in middle east. They have strong culture to follow and that is the trend. Moreover , their websites is also restricted because their king not allowed to show any negative things happening in their country which is good for bringing peace to all nations and their dictator rule help lessen the crimes in their own country.




On the other hand, I strongly agree to choose freedom 0f speech for everyone because it is also written in the bible that since the creation of mankind God given us free will to choose what is right and wrong. This is answer why we have freedom of speech and it is been debate before 18thcentury what kind of system they like to order and this modern times . It is implementing to many countries and all over the world.

 

[Raymott]

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