[Grammar] Please, fix the mistakes in the text

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Helensiv

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Hello. I've written the historical text, now I need a grammar checking. Would be grateful for any help.

Summary: The article highlights the inadequately explored problem in historiography of the involvement of the Crimean Tatar women in the social life of Crimea in the first 20 - 30 years of the twentieth century (1920 - 1930). The author announces and analyses the facts he gathered from the unpublished archives. He estimates the level of the involvement of the Crimean Tatar 20th century women in the socio-political, cultural and educational life of the peninsula.
Keywords: Crimean Tatars, women emancipation, the Crimean Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic, Soviet Union, All-Union Communist Party (bolsheviks)

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jwstesol

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This text is a fine example of why I wouldn't want to be a proof reader or stylist. May I suggest you try again, and re-write it, as I think it might look even better if you wrote it in your first language and then asked google to translate it.
 
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