They are both OK, but I would change "become" to "grow" in either case.
Student or Learner
Please would you correct mistakes in my sentences.
1.She was a beautiful woman with a doll's face, who seemed to be refusing to become old.
or should I write instead:
2. She was a beautiful woman with a doll's face, who seemed to refuse to become old.
Can "doll's face" be replaced with "baby face"?
Thank you Mike,
I am just wondering if the second part of the sentence "....who seemed to be refusing" is non-restrictive or restrictive?