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    Exclamation Is my thesis satisfactory?

    Hi, could someone please check over my thesis? I keep thinking it's over-specific. D:

    Though the novel begins with a depiction of him being seen as fearsome, Boo Radley is a caring character with a child-like innocence whose purpose in the novel is to display the negative effects of abuse and the negligence of mental illness.

    Thank you!

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    Re: Is my thesis satisfactory?

    This doesn't work: the negligence of mental illness. What do you mean by it?

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