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    #1

    [Asking for a business letter]

    Good morning everyone,

    Kindly please check for me a very short business letter as below:

    " Dear Ms. ABC


    ​Thank you for all the support you've giventhroughout the years. I am Hannah - Sales executive at ABCD Hotel, I am so pleased to inform you that I will be in charged of receiving your re from your company from now on. It should be noticed that every policies & conditions will be maintained as before.


    Should you need any further assistance, please feel free to contact me at ABED



    Best Regards"

    I am responsible for working with this company, and I want to inform them some changes. Could you all please check it for me? is It ok?
    or I need more words?

    Many Thanks,

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    Re: [Asking for a business letter]

    <<<that I will be in charged of receiving your re from your company from now on>>>

    What does that mean?

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    Re: [Asking for a business letter]

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    <<<that I will be in charged of receiving your re from your company from now on>>>

    What does that mean?
    My mistake, Mike :(, it means: "that I will be in charged of receiving your reservation from your company from now on", I am working in Hotel Sales Department, thus I want to inform to my partner my new position., ah, may be it will be: in charge of working with you and your company, is it better?

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    #4

    Re: [Asking for a business letter]

    I will be handling your company's reservations from now on. There has been no change to our policies and conditions.

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