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    #1

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    Hi guys,

    Please check these sentences.

    I deboarded the metro and went out of the station and boarded an autorickshaw but before boarding the autorickshaw I had met a girl who wad telling about wild life preservation but I took a leave from her by saying I didn't have time, I reached a company by the autorickshaw and then I got off the autorickshaw.

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    #2

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    I'd scrap it completely and start again.

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    #3

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    It needs to be split into several sentences. Avoid repeating 'autorickshaw'.

    Include words from your text in the thread titles in future. You have used this same useless title before.

    'I deboarded the metro' would have been a good title for this thread.

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    #4

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    So have I made mistake anywhere?

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    #5

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    Hello, tufguy.

    Please read Tdol's post #2 and Rover's post #3 carefully.
    I'd like to suggest that you make some amendments to your sentence by following Rover's advice.


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    #6

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    Tufguy, this is run-on sentence. I came across another one of these from you earlier.

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    #7

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    He does it all the time. Some of us are in despair.

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    #8

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    It's a relay run-on sentence.

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    #9

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    Please tell me whether, I have made any gramatical mistake. You are complaing about the run-on sentence so I will bear this in my mind in the future.

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    #10

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    You could fix this one now.

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