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I want to submit an application for my dream job and need somebody who could check my English spelling and grammar. It would be really great if you could help me!
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Dear Sir or Madam,
During my Master of Business Administration at XXX I have specialized in e-commerce. The retail concept of XXX as well as the great selection of products and designers have sparked my interest in your company. Therefore I am very interested in your job opening as a buying assistant in your head office in XXX and would like to send you my application for this position.
As a PR assistant at XXX, a fashion communication agency based in XXX, I was responsible for liaising with journalists and stylists, creating numeric reports, maintaining spread sheets and handling sample requests. I was in charge of organizing Press Days in our agency. In this responsibility I selected and negotiated offers from external services providers in respect of given budgets and managed the logistics. Other professional experience I could gain as a freelance product manager for a start-up fashion label during my bachelor thesis and as a sales assistant for different stores, like the department store XXX in XXX. From design over PR to retail I touch nearly every sector of the fashion industry and therefore have a good understanding of different responsibilities, which makes it easy for me to communicate effectively with different internal and external partners. Living in New York, XX and XX, I could establish a network of international contacts. I am fluent in English and German and have a good command of French.
My analytical and sales-oriented mind allows me to easily analyze sales data, detect new market trends and understand key priorities. With an undergraduate degree in Fashion Design, I also have a technical knowledge of fabrics and garments and a sensibility for fashion. I keep myself informed about international designer brands, their latest commercial product offers as well as the seasonal key items they promote through the fashion press. I am very passionate about luxury products and enjoy working in a fast-paced environment.
I am available for an entry in XXX. Based on my understanding of the job responsibilities and the value I could bring to your organization, my salary expectation would fall in the range of XXX toXXX per year. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person to further discuss my candidacy. Feel free to contact me at XXX, or by mail at XXX.