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    Please correct the sentence

    Hello
    One of my friend is going to start a new technology firm and he has identified the below caption for it. When I read this I felt like something is missing. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
    "People who liberate ultimate technology to others needed"

    Thanking you

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    Re: Please correct the sentence

    That caption does not work for me.

    I suggest "People who provide ultimate technology to those who need it".

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    Re: Please correct the sentence

    Is he advertising to find people to hire? Cause "people needed" is what he is saying.

    I don't think he "liberates" technology either. He may use or utilize or employ technology.

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    Re: Please correct the sentence

    We do not have the "ultimate" technology today. His tag line needs work. What is his company doing? What problem are the solving?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Please correct the sentence

    Dave, you are probably correct. They might be looking for employees.

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