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    Please make correction.

    I wonder is it necessary to publish this article? And last sentence is more than pathetic saying "it's is a threat". Oh! really! you think so. Does India fear of these jihadi groups? It's no wonder seeing Parveen swami as article Writer as he has written rubbish provocative articles in the past. Neither those jihadi groups have true knowledge of Islam nor does Praveen Swami. It's not the time to spread hatred although time to put sincere authentic stuff before the public. Whole article smells like it's cooked up and nothing else.

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    Re: Please make correction.

    "I wonder if it was really necessary to publish this article. The last sentence is more than pathetic, saying, "it's is a threat". Oh! really! You think so. Does India fear these jihadi groups? It's no wonder that Parveen Swami was the writer of the article, as he has written rubbish provocative articles in the past. Neither those jihadi groups nor Praveen Swami have true knowledge of Islam. It's not the time to spread hatred but the time to put sincere authentic stuff before the public. The whole article smells like it's cooked up and nothing else."[/QUOTE]
    I have offered some suggestions without (I hope) changing your style too much. I hope that you find it OK;

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    Re: Please make correction.

    I think "you think so?" is a question.

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