Student or Learner
If something is unnatual among these sentences, please let me know. especially the underlined.
ex)I visited Flower Village for volunteering a year ago. Frankly speaking, I wasn't willing to go there at first, but I was persuaded to go there by my friend. When I arrived there, I felt it was a good decision to go there. There I helped many sick old people. It was hard for me to help seriously sick seniors, but I felt it rewarding. After the volunteering, I felt an overflowing joy that I had never had before. If I can have another chance, I'd like to go there one more time.
Last edited by keannu; 29-May-2014 at 17:49.