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    I visited Flower Village for volunteering

    If something is unnatual among these sentences, please let me know. especially the underlined.

    ex)I visited Flower Village for volunteering a year ago. Frankly speaking, I wasn't willing to go there at first, but I was persuaded to go there by my friend. When I arrived there, I felt it was a good decision to go there. There I helped many sick old people. It was hard for me to help seriously sick seniors, but I felt it rewarding. After the volunteering, I felt an overflowing joy that I had never had before. If I can have another chance, I'd like to go there one more time.
    Last edited by keannu; 29-May-2014 at 17:49.

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