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    Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly . ( 5 stentence, thank you for advance.



    1. Thanking you for past favours,I remain"
    2 " we cant fill your older and are therefore caneling it. sorry "
    3 "you are prohibited from smoking in the storeroom"
    4 "you should not have deducted the 5 persent discount"
    5"The contract appended herewith should be executed in triplicate "


    PS. To correct them for easy understanding ,but cant not have any grammatic mistake .
    PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today .

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    Sorry, but we do not help with homework. Your teacher needs to know what you can do, not what we can do.

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    sorry , its not really homework . i am an adult , i need to have this answers for next time adult exam . but i dont have any teacher((((((((((so please help me !
    i am not an english local people . so hard for me to do these !

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    That is not consistent with your original statement: PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today .

    Which statement should I believe? To whom did you need to send the homework?

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    That is not consistent with your original statement: PLease!!! its my homework which i need to send back today .

    Which statement should I believe? To whom did you need to send the homework?


    well, i bought a book named "business writing skills". there are some assignments in it . i need to know the answer. but the book has not answers.
    i ask for help . so that i can unsderstand the assignment . i have my own answers already . but dont know right or wrong .

    i really need your professional help ///

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    We will not do your work for you. I will give you some advice, however. Pay attention to correct capitalisation and do not leave a space before punctuation marks..

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    Re: Revise these sentence please so that readers can grasp the meaning clearly

    Quote Originally Posted by wangliccsi View Post
    i need to know the answer. the book has not answers.
    My compatriot, such books should include answer keys, maybe in the back.


    Not a teacher.

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