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    please help me , how to revise the following sentences so that reader can grasp meani

    please help me , how to revise the following sentences so that reader can grasp meaning clearly


    1) you should not deducted the 5 persent discount .

    2)during the November meeting of the Executive Committee, the decision was reached to eliminate wastage.



    well, i think the 1) answer is " you should not takee 5 % discount off . " is that correct ?
    please help!

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    Re: please help me , how to revise the following sentences so that reader can grasp m

    Already answered HERE. Please don't make duplicate posts.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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