okko
New member
- Joined
- May 20, 2014
- Member Type
- Retired Academic
- Native Language
- Turkish
- Home Country
- Turkey
- Current Location
- Turkey
Hi, everyone.Although I am new member, I study English, and I am going to take an exam, so I wrote the essay. I want you to evaluate the essay and say to me my mistake. Indeed, I love children but my topic is so. Thank you
- CAUSE OF DECIDING NOT TO HAVE CHILDREN
- Children is the prettiest entities and parents who have children is the luckiest people in the World. we forget our troubles when we take care of our childrens . Every person does not think so. Some people do not want to have children these days .There are a lot of causes of deciding not to have children ; however, two stand out; economic, and responsibility.
- The first and maybe the most important cause of deciding not to have children is economic. First of all, People have to spend money for eating food, so they continue their lives. Thus,Parents having children have to spend money for growing their children. Secondly one of these parents,especially mothers, must give up their works because of the fact that children do not eat food , clean yourself and drink water on their own ; besides , they need their mother.If these mothers give up their work , income of family will declare and economi of family will aggravate.
- The another important cause of deciding not to have children is responsibility. It refers to work, and social life. Firstly, people who are deciding not to have children want not to have more responsibilities for their work life. Mothers do not go to work when their children born ; thus , their work that is not done will pile up day by day and mothers will have got more responsibility for ending their work. Secondly, having children means extra responsibility for their parents’ social life. These parents do not go to out whenever they want because children can have trouble condition, cry , and want to drink milk when their parents are out.
- To sum up, the two basic causes of deciding not to have children are economic and responsibility. If we want to have children , we should think everthing,we do not forget that the more you have children , the more you have difficulties.
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