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    Unhappy edit the passage

    please do edit this passage for me I'am not able to solve it

    For this past one year, 15 year old Samantha had been plagued with
    short, sudden attacks at shallow and fast breathing.
    She shivers and clenched her jaw and feels hungry
    and tired while she returns to normal. The doctors
    say that she probably suffer from conversion reaction.
    The disorder resulted in psychological conflicts and distress.
    The sufferer maybe getting fits, may appear to have
    muscular paralysis, blindness, deafness but may not
    be able to talk or react despite been conscious. Her
    parents were worried because the
    doctors has so far failed to prescribe
    a cure for her malady.

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    Re: edit the passage

    I'm sorry, but we can't do your homework for you.

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