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  1. B45
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    I knew I had to make a move on that day in that moment because if I hadn't I would've

    I knew I had to make a move on that day in that moment because if I hadn't I would've regretted for the rest of my life.

    Heard this from a romance movie. Is it okay?

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    Re: I knew I had to make a move on that day in that moment because if I hadn't I woul

    I knew I had to make a move on that day in that moment because if I hadn't, I would've regretted it for the rest of my life.
    (Comma optional, but it's a long sentence).

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    Re: I knew I had to make a move on that day in that moment because if I hadn't I woul

    It needs an "it" after "regretted".

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